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I enjoyed every second walking with this small group of deer. This one was just making sure I didn't over step my bounds.

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:iconfarcry77:
First of all let me tell you that I write this critique because I feel like this shot should be admired and it should be remembered every time I step out to the woods. So there is nothing much I would ask you to change in this other than very little things which you can improve. First of all I like this shot because it has more drama in It than many animal shots wee see. The animal looks curious and kind of has that Disney peek from a corner. Furthermore the lights are good and colors and filled with the joy of the nature.

Since I said there is little to be improved I know how hard to capture something like a wild animal in its free world with good composition and focus. I don’t mind the focus here coz its really good. But maybe the composition can improve. The animal is fine but I think that tree in the middle distracts the scene. Not too much because it’s the woods after all and without trees it will not be completed. Maybe it should be more lightened up or more to the blur side. Or you can crop the whole shot in a way that its right corners ends with that tree. You Choose :)

Regarding the lights I will do some touch ups with adjusting a wee bit of highlights and shadows. I’m sure it will give more drama to it :nod:

Any way as I said before I like this shot. Keep shooting and filling the web with good shots like this. Cheers :bow:
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:iconwapamup:
oh wow! it must be a great moment for you! :D

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:iconleavenotrase:
It really was. Thanks

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What a capture! I love the soft limey green as a compliment to the browny tones. :clap:
:iconleavenotrase:
thanks

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:iconblazestar13:
soo cuttee!!!.. x3

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Bambi's watching you ;)

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:iconrain2river66:
perfect! This is a real moment, I can see you know your space well, it is no small feat to walk with these animals, they are so cautious.

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They were patient with me and I also respected there space, in the end I think they didn't mind me being there at all.

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:iconrain2river66:
Yes, most likely. Fro my experience if you respect them, and have good energy, they will nearly as curious about us as we them.

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I see your silver shining town
But I know I can't go there
streets run deep with poison wine
doorways crawl with fear
think I'll drift for old where it's at
Where the weed grows green and fine
And wrap myself around a bush Of that bright Oaxaca vine
:iconr3novatio:
Wow, that is AWESOME! :clap:

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